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The graph below shows the spending on research into renewable sources of energy in four countries between 1975 to 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The graph below shows the spending on research into renewable sources of energy in four countries between 1975 to 2000
The given line chart illustrates the expenditure of individual on research about renewable energy in Switzerland, Denmark, Spain, The UK from 1975 to 2000. Overall, the Swiss had been spending the highest amount on energy research, whereas the lowest money invested by the UK over the period. From 1975 to 1980, citizen of Switzerland spent on research increased significantly from nothing to $2 per person and this trend incessants till the end, which made up $5 per person in 2000. Switzerland followed by Denmark, expenditure on energy witnessed a sharp go up in 1980, constituted just above $1 per person. This amount, around $3. 5 per person, rocketed in 2000, after declining marginally to a little over $1 per person from 1980 to 1990. However, trends fluctuated for remain two countries. Approximately $1 per person spent by both countries in 1980, before a moderate decreasing for Spain and the UK, which account for $1 and almost half respectively. These trends ended below $1 per person in 2000, after fluctuating over the periods.
The
given
line chart illustrates the expenditure of individual on research about renewable energy in Switzerland, Denmark, Spain, The UK from 1975 to 2000.

Overall
, the Swiss had been spending the highest amount on energy research, whereas the lowest money invested by the UK over the period.

From 1975 to 1980, citizen of Switzerland spent on research increased
significantly
from nothing to $2 per
person
and this trend
incessants till
the
end
, which made up $5 per
person
in 2000. Switzerland followed by Denmark, expenditure on energy witnessed a sharp go up in 1980, constituted
just
above $1 per
person
. This amount, around $3. 5 per
person
, rocketed in 2000, after declining
marginally
to a
little
over $1 per
person
from 1980 to 1990.

However
, trends fluctuated for remain two countries. Approximately $1 per
person
spent by both countries in 1980,
before
a moderate decreasing for Spain and the UK, which account for $1 and almost half
respectively
. These trends ended below $1 per
person
in 2000, after fluctuating over the periods.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph below shows the spending on research into renewable sources of energy in four countries between 1975 to 2000

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6.5
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