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SUMMARISES THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELEVANT v.2

SUMMARISES THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELEVANT v. 2
The diagram illustrates the radio and television audiences in the UK throughout the day in December 1992. Overall, the television and radio audiences was erratic. It fluctuated irregularly from noon to midnight. The television audiences moved up and down strongly. The trend was obviously upward from 6 a. m to 2 p. m. Between 4 p. m and 12 a. m, the figure reached its highest level with 45 % of UK population. After this time, the figure nose – dived dramatically with 2 % at 3 a. m. The radio audiences went up initually and plunged considerably at the end. The figure had a slight growth and leaped to a new peak at 8 p. m with 28 %. However, it went into free fall steadily in the last time. The figure felt back to the lowest level with 4 %. In conclusion, the line graph witnessed the television and radio audiences in the UK throughout the day in December 1992.
The diagram illustrates the
radio
and
television
audiences
in the UK throughout the day in December 1992.

Overall
, the
television
and
radio
audiences
was erratic. It fluctuated
irregularly
from noon to midnight.

The
television
audiences
moved
up and down
strongly
. The trend was
obviously
upward from 6 a. m to 2 p. m. Between 4 p. m and 12 a. m, the
figure
reached its highest level with 45 % of UK population. After this time, the
figure
nose
dived
dramatically
with 2 % at 3 a. m.

The
radio
audiences
went up
initually
and plunged
considerably
at the
end
. The
figure
had a slight growth and leaped to a new peak at 8 p. m with 28 %.
However
, it went into free fall
steadily
in the last time. The
figure
felt back to the lowest level with 4 %.

In conclusion
, the line graph witnessed the
television
and
radio
audiences
in the UK throughout the day in December 1992.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic SUMMARISES THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELEVANT v. 2

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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