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The picture below demonstrates the hydroelectric power station and the electricity which is generated at it. as it can be seen from diagram, the process of generating electricity consists of four reversible stages. Firstly, the water from river enters the v.2

The picture below demonstrates the hydroelectric power station and the electricity which is generated at it. as it can be seen from diagram, the process of generating electricity consists of four reversible stages. Firstly, the water from river enters the v. 2
The picture below demonstrates the hydroelectric power station and the electricity which is generated at it. as it can be seen from diagram, the process of generating electricity consists of four reversible stages. Firstly, the water from river enters the reservoir which has stored high-level of it behind the dam. During the day, barrier of reservoir is removed and allows water flow through pipe to the turbines which is located in the power station. In the power station turbines and generator poruce electricity by converting hydrolic energy to electric energy. The electric energy which was produced in power station, supply to the public by power lines and the excess water will stored in the near-by reservoir. At night, water in it, will pump to a pipe where is guided to a original reservoir.
The picture below demonstrates the hydroelectric
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power
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and the electricity which
is generated
at it. as it can be
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seen
from diagram, the process of generating electricity consists of four reversible stages.

Firstly
, the
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water
from river enters the
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reservoir
which has stored high-level of it behind the dam. During the day, barrier of
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reservoir
is removed
and
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allows
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water
flow through pipe to the turbines which
is located
in the
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power
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station
. In the
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turbines and generator
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poruce
electricity by converting
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hydrolic
energy to electric energy.

The electric energy which
was produced
in
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power
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station
, supply to the public by
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lines and the excess
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water
will
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stored
in the near-by
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reservoir
. At night,
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water
in it, will pump to a pipe where
is guided
to
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a
original
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.
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IELTS academic The picture below demonstrates the hydroelectric power station and the electricity which is generated at it. as it can be seen from diagram, the process of generating electricity consists of four reversible stages. Firstly, the water from river enters the v. 2

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