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The table below describes percentages of homeschooled students in Some Country in 1999-2004. v.3

The table below describes percentages of homeschooled students in Some Country in 1999-2004. v. 3
The presented table gives information about the percentages of students who got home schooling in different academic levels in Some Country from 1999 to 2004. As is seen from the given data, the homeschooling concept became more popular in the later years and highest percentage of homeschooling was done for kindergarten students. According to the given illustration, 2. 4% kindergarten students received home schooling in the year 1999 while this percentage kept on increasing and reached to 2. 9% in 2004. Percentage of homeschooling was higher for the kindergarten students than students in other academic levels. In 1999, 1. 5% home schooled students could be observed in grade 1-2 & grade 5-6 while this percentage was 1. 6% for the remaining two groups (i. e. grade 3-4 & grade 7-8). The percentage of homeschooled students from grade 1-7 showed some fluctuations but these ratios increased over the time. In the year 2004, homeschooled students’ percentage were more than 2% for each category and the highest growth could be observed for the grade 5-6 & grade 7-8 students.
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data, the homeschooling concept became more popular in the later years and highest
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on increasing and reached to 2. 9% in 2004.
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of homeschooling was higher for the kindergarten
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in other academic levels. In 1999, 1. 5%
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home schooled
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5-6 while this
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was 1. 6% for the remaining two groups (
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3-4 &
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7-8). The
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these ratios increased over the time. In the year 2004, homeschooled
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students’
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were more than 2% for each category and the highest growth could
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for the
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grade
5-6 &
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IELTS academic The table below describes percentages of homeschooled students in Some Country in 1999-2004. v. 3

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177 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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