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The graph below gives information on the population of turtles in India from v.2

The graph below gives information on the population of turtles in India from v. 2
The given line graph illustrates the number of population of four various kinds of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012. The unit is measured in Index. It can be clearly seen from the graph that the number of Olive Ridley turtles soared within the given period of time and the figure of Leatherback Turtles gradually plummeted across the given period. To begin with, in the year 1980 the number different turtle population represented the same figure (100). After that, the number of Leatherback progressively rose up and reached to above 130 in the year 1997. Thereafter it showed fluctuations and presented the figure of the population to 130 during the year 2012. Similarly, all species showed gradual increase till 1987 (110) and following that depicted oscillation and hit figure almost 110. Green Turtles showed a downward trend. The number of Green turtles palpitated throughout the given period and the population figure reached almost 95 in the year 1989. The number of Olive Ridley Turtles presented sharp increase till 1987(110) and thereafter showed sharp decline throughout the given years and reached its number to below 60 in the year 2012, which is the least number of the population showed among turtles.
The
given
line graph illustrates the
number
of
population
of four various kinds of
turtles
in India between 1980 and 2012. The unit
is measured
in Index. It can be
clearly
seen
from the graph that the
number
of Olive
Ridley
turtles
soared within the
given
period of time and the
figure
of
Leatherback
Turtles
gradually
plummeted across the
given
period.

To
begin
with, in the
year
1980 the
number
different
turtle
population
represented the same
figure
(100). After that, the
number
of
Leatherback
progressively
rose up and reached to above 130 in the
year
1997.
Thereafter
it
showed
fluctuations and presented the
figure
of the
population
to 130 during the
year
2012.

Similarly
, all species
showed
gradual increase till 1987 (110) and following that depicted oscillation and hit
figure
almost 110. Green
Turtles
showed
a downward trend. The
number
of Green
turtles
palpitated throughout the
given
period and the
population
figure
reached almost 95 in the
year
1989. The
number
of Olive
Ridley
Turtles
presented sharp increase till 1987(110) and thereafter
showed
sharp decline throughout the
given
years and reached its
number
to below 60 in the
year
2012, which is the least
number
of the
population
showed
among
turtles
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph below gives information on the population of turtles in India from v. 2

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