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Tables: Sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana (1999 and 2004) in five countries European. Coffee1999 (million of European)2004 (Million of european)UK1, 520Switzerland36Denmark1, 82Beligium11, 7Sweden0, 81Banana19992004UK15, 5Switzerland1547Denmark20, 9 v.1

Tables: Sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana (1999 and 2004) in five countries European. Coffee1999 (million of European)2004 (Million of european)UK1, 520Switzerland36Denmark1, 82Beligium11, 7Sweden0, 81Banana19992004UK15, 5Switzerland1547Denmark20, 9 v. 1
Two tables shows five different countries of European selling coffee and banana of fairtrade-labelled since 1999 to 2004. Data percentage of millions of euros. To begin, in 1999 expenditure of product coffee the higher 3 million of euros. Beside that in other state under 2 value. Contrast sales of banana in Switzerland the total 15 euros of million, beside that starting 0. 6 to 2. Next in 2004 on coffee brand were increased in-come from all nation. Firstly, there were 3 countries got a slight rise in the revenue amount of 1. Likely in Belgium saw slow fluctuation in the sales of 1, 7. Next, Both in Sweden and Denmark countries, sales of coffee rose slightly to 0, 2 million of euros. Secondly, demand bought of coffee in Switzerland rose gradually in 100% from 3 to 6 million of euros. The last sales of coffee in UK was significant increase in the sales of coffee amount of 18, 5. In the other hands, During the period 1999 and 2004 emission of banana fairtrade-labelled had fluctuated data comparing coffee. In UK from 1 to 5, 5 millions of euros. Then, in Switzerland the customer of banana reached a high from 15 to 47. The expenditure of sales that, become the higher in European. But, twisting in Denmark and Sweden, emission of that product decreased. 2002 saw small jump sales in number of 1, 8 to 1 in Sweden, and from 2 to 0, 9 in Denmark. But the sales of banana rose gradually in Belgium countries from 0, 6 to 4 millions of European. Over all, sales of fairtade-labelled coffee and banana in European. Generally the higher sales of banana label comparison coffee label. If demand of coffee the bigger in UK countries, and banana in Switzerland. But reduced sales of banana in Sweden countries
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IELTS academic Tables: Sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana (1999 and 2004) in five countries European. Coffee1999 (million of European)2004 (Million of european)UK1, 520Switzerland36Denmark1, 82Beligium11, 7Sweden0, 81Banana19992004UK15, 5Switzerland1547Denmark20, 9 v. 1

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