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The graph below gives information on the population of turtles in India from v.1

The graph below gives information on the population of turtles in India from v. 1
The line graph gives data on different turtle species in India between 1980 and 2012. The given turtle population index clearly states that leatherback turtles greatly reduced during the given period while the Olive Ridley species managed to increase their population in India. Analysing the illustration reveal that there were 111 turtle species in India and the 1980 turtle population index considered 100 units and in this year, all turtles in India were at unit 100. However, over the time, leatherback turtle’s number dropped significantly and reached to only 60 units while an opposite trend could be observed in the case of Olive Ridley turtles. This species continually expanded, according to the index, till 1997 and then showed some fluctuations with a sharp drop in 2012 when it was just over 120 units. Finally, the green turtle’s index indicates that a rapid oscillation was visible in the population of this turtle. Over the years, this species's population, however, slightly dropped and they were just over 90 units in 2012. The index of all turtle species did not change significantly, though there were many ups and downs in this number. The important information that the diagram provides is the number of various types of turtle species. It was 19 for leatherback turtles, 38 for green turtles and 20 for Olive Ridley.
The line graph gives data on
different
turtle
species in India between 1980 and 2012. The
given
turtle
population
index
clearly
states that
leatherback
turtles
greatly
reduced
during the
given
period while the Olive
Ridley
species managed to increase their
population
in India.

Analysing
the illustration reveal that there were 111
turtle
species in India and the 1980
turtle
population
index
considered 100
units
and in this year, all
turtles
in India were at
unit
100.
However
,
over
the time,
leatherback
turtle’s
number dropped
significantly
and reached to
only
60
units
while an opposite trend could
be observed
in the case of Olive
Ridley
turtles
. This species
continually
expanded, according to the
index
, till 1997 and then
showed
some
fluctuations with a sharp drop in 2012 when it was
just
over
120
units
.
Finally
, the green
turtle’s
index
indicates that a rapid oscillation was visible in the
population
of this
turtle
.
Over
the years, this
species's
population
,
however
,
slightly
dropped and
they were
just
over
90
units
in 2012. The
index
of all
turtle
species did not
change
significantly
, though there were
many
ups and downs in this number. The
important
information that the diagram provides is the number of various types of
turtle
species. It was 19 for
leatherback
turtles
, 38 for green
turtles
and 20 for Olive
Ridley
.
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