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The table and chart below show the time spent at leisure and household activities in Britain Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The table and chart below show the time spent at leisure and household activities in Britain
The given table and bar graph illustrate the time spent on free-time activities and household activities in Britain. Overall, it is clear from both table and bar graph that, men has spent more time on leisure activities where the majority of time on household activities spent more by women. According to the table that, men has spent 137 minutes on TV, video, and on radio and 15 minutes on sport where women spent less time on this kind of activities. Females spent 118 minutes on TV, video, and on radio which fall slightly compared with men where only 11 minutes spent on sport. In reading activities, both men and women spent about equal time. Men spent 18 minutes and women spent 19 minutes per day. The bar chart beholds the time spent on household activities. Both men and women spent the greatest number of time on cooking and washing. Men spent only around 30 minutes but women escalate sharply and do this activity for around about 75 minutes. Women also spent more time on shopping and clothes washing and ironing than men. They spent just about 35 minutes on shopping and 30 minutes on clothes washing and ironing. Interestingly, activities of repair, men spent more time just under 30 minutes but women spent only half of minutes than of men.
The
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given
table and bar graph illustrate the
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time
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spent
on free-time
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activities
and household
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activities
in Britain.

Overall
, it is
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clear
from both table and bar graph that,
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men
has
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spent
more
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time
on leisure
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activities
where the majority of
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time
on household
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activities
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spent
more by women.

According to the table that,
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men
has
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spent
137 minutes on TV, video, and on radio and 15 minutes on sport where
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women
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spent
less
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time
on this kind of
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activities
. Females
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spent
118 minutes on TV, video, and on radio which fall
slightly
compared with
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men
where
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only
11 minutes
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spent
on sport. In reading
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activities
, both
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men
and
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women
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spent
about equal
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time
.
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Men
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spent
18 minutes and
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women
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spent
19 minutes per day.

The bar chart beholds the
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time
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spent
on household
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activities
. Both
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men
and
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women
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spent
the greatest number of
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time
on cooking and washing.
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Men
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spent
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only
around 30 minutes
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but
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women
escalate
sharply
and do this
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activity
for around about 75 minutes.
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Women
also
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spent
more
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time
on shopping and clothes washing and ironing than
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men
. They
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spent
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just
about 35 minutes on shopping and 30 minutes on clothes washing and ironing.
Interestingly
,
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activities
of repair,
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men
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spent
more
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time
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just
under 30 minutes
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but
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women
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spent
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only
half of minutes than of
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men
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
52Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The table and chart below show the time spent at leisure and household activities in Britain

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
220 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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