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The pie chart below show the main reason why agricultural land become less productive. The table show how these cause affected three regions of the world during 1990s. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparis v.2

The pie chart below show the main reason why agricultural land become less productive. The table show how these cause affected three regions of the world during 1990s.
The pie chart and table describe the reasons of destruction of farming land in three different areas in 1990s. Averagely over grazing has been known as a main cause of drop in productivity of agricultural land. Over-grazing, over-cultivation- deforestation and other is introduced as a most important devastating parameters which decrease the beneficial of agriculture. First of all, Europe region suffer again 23% total land degraded, on the other hand, just 5% of agricultural land degraded in north America. Deforestation was the most significant cause of agricultural land demolishment in Europe by 9. 8% and over-grazing by 11. 3% introduced as a main reason in Oceania, while, Over-cultivation but had not any effect on agriculture productivity there. In North America over cultivation and deforestation had the most and the least effect respectively. Totally, apart from over-grazing, Europe had the most percentage of degradation by introduced variable, in comparing with other two areas.
The pie chart and table
describe
the reasons of destruction of farming
land
in three
different
areas
in 1990s
.
Averagely
over grazing has
been known
as a main cause of drop in productivity of agricultural land.

Over-grazing, over-cultivation- deforestation and other
is introduced
as a most
important
devastating parameters which decrease
the beneficial of
agriculture.
First of all
, Europe region suffer again 23% total
land
degraded,
on the other hand
,
just
5% of agricultural
land
degraded in
north America
. Deforestation was the most significant cause of agricultural
land
demolishment
in Europe by 9. 8% and over-grazing by 11. 3% introduced as a main reason in Oceania, while, Over-cultivation
but
had not any effect on agriculture productivity there. In North America over cultivation and deforestation had the most and the least effect
respectively
.
Totally
, apart from over-grazing, Europe had the most percentage of degradation by introduced variable, in comparing with other two areas.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic The pie chart below show the main reason why agricultural land become less productive. The table show how these cause affected three regions of the world during 1990s.

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2 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
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