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The plans below show the layout of university's sport centre now and how it will look after development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make the comparisions where relevant v.2

The plans below show the layout of university's sport centre now and how it will look after development.
The pictures illustrate the modification of facilities at university' s sport unit, comparing present and the future. It is clear that significant change is to two outdoor courts will be transformed into leisure pool and sport hall. These areas also will be expand toward the north and south. The western outdoor court will be replaced by leisure pool. Front of the pool will be developed a changing room and sport shop will be added beside. The other outdoor court will be changed into sport hall. On the left of the hall will be installed 2 studio together. Cafeteria and changing room will be taken place with front of sport hall. The area of middle of university' s sport center will be almost maitained as original. Students will go to reception counter, then continue to access changing room on the lelf of the pool or access seating area on the right of the pool. Only gym room will be stretched toward the east.
The pictures illustrate the modification of facilities at
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sport
unit, comparing present and the future.

It is
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clear
that significant
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change
is to two outdoor courts will
be transformed
into leisure
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pool
and
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sport
hall. These areas
also
will be
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expand
toward the north and south.

The western outdoor court will
be replaced
by leisure
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pool
. Front of the
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pool
will
be developed
a changing
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room
and
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sport
shop will be
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added
beside. The other outdoor court will be
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changed
into
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sport
hall. On the
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left
of the hall will
be installed
2
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studio
together. Cafeteria and changing
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room
will
be taken
place with front of
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sport
hall.

The area of middle of
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university&
#039; s
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sport
center will be almost
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maitained
as original. Students will go to reception counter, then continue to access changing
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room
on the
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lelf
of the
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pool
or access seating area on the right of the
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pool
.
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Only
gym
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room
will
be stretched
toward the east.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes
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IELTS academic The plans below show the layout of university's sport centre now and how it will look after development.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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