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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The 2 plans indicate organisation of a sports facility of a university now and after refurbishment. The refurbishment work will increase building significantly in size as seen from second plan. Thereby its size will increase in future approximately 3 times than now it is. Obviously, the refurbishment work will demand a range of equipment and work force due to its size. First significant change is that outdoor courts will be leisure pool which will be contained in sports center. Furthermore, length of gym will be extended about twice and east outdoor courts will become sports hall which also be obtained in sports center which will be built. New sports center will open changing room, sports shop and cafe which will be situated right and east side of entrance. On the north east side of sport center, there will be 2 dance studio identical in their size. Finally, there will be 3 sections which will keep its present location and size after redevelopment of sports center (changing room of pool, 25 m pool and its seating)
The 2 plans indicate
organisation
of a
sports
facility of a university
now
and after refurbishment.

The refurbishment work will increase building
significantly
in size as
seen
from second plan. Thereby its size will increase in future approximately 3
times
than
now
it is.
Obviously
, the refurbishment work will demand a range of equipment and work force due to its size.

First
significant
change
is that outdoor courts will be leisure pool which will
be contained
in
sports
center.
Furthermore
, length of gym will
be extended
about twice and east outdoor courts will become
sports
hall which
also
be obtained
in
sports
center which will
be built
. New
sports
center will open changing room,
sports
shop and
cafe
which will
be situated
right and east side of entrance. On the
north east
side of
sport
center, there will be 2 dance
studio
identical in their size.

Finally
, there will be 3 sections which will
keep
its present location and size after redevelopment of
sports
center (changing room of pool, 25 m pool and its seating)
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic The plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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4 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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