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The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students PhD students and junior lecturers at an Australian university v.2

The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students PhD students and junior lecturers at an Australian university v. 2
The pie charts illustrate how many journal articles are read by all students, PHD students and junior lecturers at a university in Australia. Overall, it can be seen that PHD students read more number of articles than other groups. Furthermore, majority of students read no more than 5 articles per week while most of the junior lecturers read between 6 to 11 articles. The majority of students were found reading 1 to 5 articles per week which accounted for 67%. However, this figure was significantly lower among PHD students and junior teachers which was 5% and 1% respectively. Surprisingly, 75% of junior lecturers read between 6 to 11 journal articles in a week. On the other hand, the percentage of doctorates students who read more than 12 journal articles within a week was significantly higher, at 80%. Meanwhile, among other students and junior lecturers, these figures accounted for 12% and 24% respectively.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students PhD students and junior lecturers at an Australian university v. 2

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