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The plan below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

A couple of maps offer how the layout of a sport centre in university change in the future after replicating. Overall, the most significant change will be the presence of more new places leading to a sport layout. By contrast, two outdoor courts will not work in the future being demolished. Looking at the map for more details, while do 3 areas called a 25m pool, a seating and a changing room maintain, there has more new wonderfully places. To the East of the 25m pool, next to the seating, a hall for sport activities will be developed. In addition, there will have 2 studios for students desiring to dance. Furthermore, a future gym room will be twice as large as the old one. Especially, what makes a future centre different from old one is both cafe and sports shop respectively in the right and left turn when you immediately enter the centre. Apart from maintaining an old changing room, the centre will have 2 more same places for students. Finally, a new pool will be opened in leisure time that is bigger than another. It will be took place in the left side to the West of the 25m pool.

IELTS academic The plan below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. v.4

A couple of maps
offer
how the layout of a
sport
centre
in university
change
in the
future
after replicating.

Overall
, the most significant
change
will be the presence of more new
places
leading to a
sport
layout. By contrast, two outdoor courts will not work in the
future
being demolished
.

Looking at the map for more
details
, while do 3 areas called a
25m
pool
, a seating and a changing room maintain, there has more new
wonderfully
places
. To the East of the
25m
pool
,
next
to the seating, a hall for
sport
activities will
be developed
.
In addition
, there will have 2 studios for students desiring to dance.
Furthermore
, a
future
gym room will be twice as large as the
old
one.

Especially
, what
makes
a
future
centre
different
from
old
one is both
cafe
and
sports
shop
respectively
in the right and
left
turn when you immediately enter the
centre
. Apart from maintaining an
old
changing room, the
centre
will have 2 more same
places
for students.
Finally
, a new
pool
will
be opened
in leisure time
that is
bigger than another. It will be
took
place
in the
left
side to the West of the
25m
pool
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes
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