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the pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country v.1

the pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country v. 1
The charts given describe the amount of electricity which generated by various resources in irlandia, and the percentage of electricity which is used for applicants by irish. It is evident that the highest source is from the coal, and Irish people spend a lot of energies for heating applicant. Looking more closely, the coal have the biggest amount for producing electricity as much more than two fifths, it is followed by the figure of natural gas which have lower 10% from the highest number. Wind and solar are the minority of this category, which only have one in ten respectively. Moving to the data of applicants which use the energy of electricity in irlandia. Most of the houses in there are using electricity for heating their house at 55%, and also it is used by enlightenment arround lower 2 times than heating. Consumer electronics and phone charging consume 10% electricity for both of them, whereas kitchen divices have higher 3 times than them.
The charts
given
describe
the amount of
electricity
which generated by various resources in
irlandia
, and the percentage of
electricity
which is
used
for applicants by
irish
. It is evident that the highest source is from the coal, and Irish
people
spend
a lot of
energies for heating applicant.

Looking more
closely
, the coal have the biggest amount for producing
electricity
as much more than two fifths, it
is followed
by the figure of natural gas which have lower 10% from the highest number. Wind and solar are the minority of this category, which
only
have one in ten
respectively
.

Moving to the data of applicants which
use
the energy of
electricity
in
irlandia
. Most of the
houses
in there are using
electricity
for heating their
house
at 55%, and
also
it is
used
by enlightenment
arround
lower 2 times than heating. Consumer electronics and phone charging consume 10%
electricity
for both of them, whereas kitchen
divices
have higher 3 times than them.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic the pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country v. 1

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3 paragraphs
163 words
6.0
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