The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. v.2
The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home. v. 2
The presented graph illustrates the electricity requisition in England during two different seasons, winter and summer. Meanwhile, the pie chart demonstrates how the electricity is utilised daily and to what quantity.
In general, both in winter and summer, the electricity demand rises up from around 9: 00 am to about 23: 00 pm and the electricity in mainly spent for heating room and water.
Looking at the detail, the electricity demand in summer is reckoned between 10, 000 – 20, 000 units. It goes to around 12, 000 before 9 am and slightly increases to around 20, 000 at 14 pm and relatively fluctuates until the rest of the day. However, in winter, the electricity requisition sets about 35, 000 units at 00 am and gradually spikes before it actually rises at 9 am and keeps the level swells until around 45, 000 units at 23 pm.
Meanwhile, due to utilisation and quantity, heating room and water require the vast majority, 52%, of electricity using. This high proportion is related to the high electricity demand for these two appliances during winter. Whereas other kitchen and electronic devices, vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electronic tools amass lower proportion, 48%, than heating rooms and water.
The presented graph illustrates the
electricity
requisition in England during two
different
seasons,
winter
and summer. Meanwhile, the pie chart demonstrates how the
electricity
is
utilised
daily and to what quantity.
In general
, both in
winter
and summer, the
electricity
demand rises up from
around
9: 00 am to about 23: 00 pm and the
electricity
in
mainly
spent for heating room and water.
Looking at the detail, the
electricity
demand in summer
is reckoned
between 10, 000 – 20, 000 units. It goes to
around
12, 000
before
9 am and
slightly
increases to
around
20, 000 at 14 pm and
relatively
fluctuates until the rest of the day.
However
, in
winter
, the
electricity
requisition sets about 35, 000 units at 00 am and
gradually
spikes
before
it actually rises at 9 am and
keeps
the level swells until
around
45, 000 units at 23 pm.
Meanwhile, due to
utilisation
and quantity, heating room and water require the vast majority, 52%, of
electricity
using. This high proportion
is related
to the high
electricity
demand for these two appliances during
winter
. Whereas other kitchen and electronic devices, vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electronic tools amass lower proportion, 48%, than heating rooms and water.
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