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The pie charts show information on the proportion of carbohidrates, protein, and fatin three different diets v.1

The pie charts show information on the proportion of carbohidrates, protein, and fatin three different diets v. 1
The pie charts show information on the proportion of carbohidrates, protein, and fatin three different diets on the whole, diet proportion for 3 different different diets almost the some, overall of all different type of diets compored to others. According to the percentage, healty diet for dport need of 50% carbohydrates like a healthy diet, and for average demiet need at least 40% carbohydrat, smaller than the others, but for protein needs more than other up 40%, wheres for healty diet for sport and healty diet just need 25% and 30%. For fat portion, heathy diet and average diet have the same tendency is 20%, comparated with healthy diet just need 25% and 30% for fat portion, healthy diet and average diet have the same tendency is 20%, compared with healthy diet for sport whi needs less 15% for fat
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three
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diets almost the
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compored
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healty
diet
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for dport
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of 50% carbohydrates like a
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diet, and for average
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demiet
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at least 40%
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for protein
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more than other up 40%,
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healty
diet for sport and
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healty
diet
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25% and 30%. For
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portion,
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diet
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25% and 30% for
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healthy
diet and average diet have the same tendency is 20%, compared with
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healthy
diet for sport
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needs
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IELTS academic The pie charts show information on the proportion of carbohidrates, protein, and fatin three different diets v. 1

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