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The pie charts compares three different groups in terms of the the number of artciles from academic journals read weekly at a university in Australia It is evident that the number of journal articles varies widely in different groups The vast majority of v.1

The pie charts compares three different groups in terms of the the number of artciles from academic journals read weekly at a university in Australia It is evident that the number of journal articles varies widely in different groups The vast majority of v. 1
The pie charts compares three different groups in terms of the the number of artciles from academic journals read weekly at a university in Australia. It is evident that the number of journal articles varies widely in different groups. The vast majority of those studying doctorates read at least 12 journal articles while all students on average read the least number of artciles each week. Between one and five journal articles are read by a third of all students per week, compared to a mere 5% of PhD students. Lecturers who read with the same frequency account for only 1%, which is the lowest on the all three charts. By contrast, lecturers register the highest proportions in “6-11” category, at 75%, while the equivalent figures for all students and PhD students were merely 21% and 15% respectively. A striking 80% of PhD level students read 12 and more journal articles every week. While the same numbers of articles are enjoyed by a nearly quarter of lecturers, the percentage of all students who read more than 11 articles is only half that figure.
The pie charts compares three
different
groups in terms of
the the
number
of
artciles
from academic
journals
read
weekly at a university in Australia.

It is evident that the
number
of
journal
articles
varies
widely
in
different
groups. The vast majority of those studying doctorates
read
at least 12
journal
articles
while all
students
on average
read
the least
number
of
artciles
each week.

Between one and five
journal
articles
are
read
by a third of all
students
per week, compared to a mere 5% of PhD
students
. Lecturers who
read
with the same frequency account for
only
1%, which is the lowest on the all three charts. By contrast, lecturers register the highest proportions in “6-11” category, at 75%, while the equivalent figures for all
students
and PhD
students
were
merely
21% and 15%
respectively
.

A striking 80% of PhD level
students
read
12 and more
journal
articles
every week. While the same
numbers
of
articles
are enjoyed
by a
nearly quarter
of lecturers, the percentage of all
students
who
read
more than 11
articles
is
only
half that figure.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS academic The pie charts compares three different groups in terms of the the number of artciles from academic journals read weekly at a university in Australia It is evident that the number of journal articles varies widely in different groups The vast majority of v. 1

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