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The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words v.2

The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days
The bar chart illustrates a survey carried out in an European country, with regard to the percentage of citizens going to movie theatres during the week, in the years 2003, 2005 and 2007. It is clear that the cinemas received a considerably larger proportion of customers on the weekend than that during the first 4 days of the week. Noticeably, nothing was changed in terms of the percentage of residents spending time at the cinemas on Friday over the 4-year period. From 2003 to 2007, the proportion figures for movie theatre visitors at the weekend never dropped below 30% at all. Meanwhile, there are a vast variety of fluctuations predominantly between Monday and Thursday. 20% of people passing cinemas was by far the highest percentage among these days, while the lowest equivalent figure took close to 10% on Tuesday in 2005 and on Wednesday in 2007 respectively. In respect of the year 2003, the percentage of cinema-goers varied relentlessly during the first 5 days of the week, peaking at 45% on Saturday, then fell off dramatically by over 20% in the last day. Interestingly, the other 2 years of the surveyed period saw the relatively similar circumstances. In fact, on Friday, the movie theatres received the same 30% over the period shown.
The bar chart illustrates a survey carried out in
an
European country, with regard to the
percentage
of citizens going to movie
theatres
during the week, in the years 2003, 2005 and 2007.

It is
clear
that the cinemas received a
considerably
larger proportion of customers on the weekend than that during the
first
4 days of the week.
Noticeably
, nothing was
changed
in terms of the
percentage
of residents spending time at the cinemas on Friday over the
4-year
period.

From 2003 to 2007, the proportion figures for movie
theatre
visitors at the weekend never dropped below 30% at all. Meanwhile, there are a vast variety of fluctuations
predominantly
between Monday and Thursday. 20% of
people
passing cinemas was by far the highest
percentage
among these days, while the lowest equivalent figure took close to 10% on Tuesday in 2005 and on Wednesday in 2007
respectively
.

In respect of the
year
2003, the
percentage
of cinema-goers varied
relentlessly
during the
first
5 days of the week, peaking at 45% on Saturday, then fell off
dramatically
by over 20% in the last day.
Interestingly
, the other 2 years of the surveyed period
saw
the
relatively
similar circumstances. In fact, on Friday, the movie
theatres
received the same 30% over the period shown.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
6Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS academic The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days

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212 words
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