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The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007 Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate Write at least 150 words v.2

The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007
The pie charts compare the number of housing ownership and renting in the UK for 1991 and 2007 in percentage terms. In 1991, home owner took the main proportion, which was approximately 60% or over half of all homes. Socially rented homes accounted for 22% or a quarter of all homes. The remaining homes were mostly private renting (10%) with a tiny fraction of social housing, which only took 6%. Sixteen years later, in 2007, there was an increase in the percentage of home owner, which has reached 70% or thee quarters of all. This was a rise of 10% compared with 1991. The increase of home ownership could be explained by the the decrease of social renting from 22% in 1991 to 18% in 2007. Privately rented homes remained unchanged. However, there were 5 more millions homes so the number of private renting must have risen despite of being unchanged in percentage. Social housing decreased three-fold compared with 1991, which had dropped from 6% to nearly 2%. To summarize, home owner is the largest sector while social housing is the least popular type of housing.
The pie charts compare the number of housing ownership and
renting
in the UK for 1991 and 2007 in percentage terms.

In 1991,
home owner
took the main proportion, which was approximately 60% or over half of all
homes
.
Socially
rented
homes
accounted for 22% or a quarter of all
homes
. The remaining
homes
were
mostly
private
renting
(10%) with a tiny fraction of
social
housing, which
only
took 6%.

Sixteen years later, in 2007, there was an increase in the percentage of
home owner
, which has reached 70% or thee quarters of all. This was a rise of 10% compared with 1991. The increase of home ownership could be
explained
by
the the
decrease of
social
renting
from 22% in 1991 to 18% in 2007.
Privately
rented
homes
remained unchanged.
However
, there were 5 more millions
homes
so
the number of private
renting
must
have risen
despite of
being unchanged
in percentage.
Social
housing decreased three-fold compared with 1991, which had dropped from 6% to
nearly
2%.

To summarize
,
home owner
is the largest sector while
social
housing is the least popular type of housing.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
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