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The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. v.2

The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. v. 2
The pie charts represent the changes with the proportion of housing ownership and renting between 1991 and 2007. Overall, the total number of houses available increased from 22 million houses in 1991 to 27 million houses in 2007. It is interesting to note that, the proportion of home ownership increased substantially while social renting and social housing reduced in its portion except for private renting. In 1991, home ownership were the most popular type of housing, accounting for 60%, followed by social renting which amounting of nearly 23% of total houses and the remaining portion was directed to private rent (about 11%) and social housing (of about 6%). In contrast, by 2007, the proportion of home ownership rose substantially to 70%, which represent 10% of growing rates. However, the rest of housing types decreased; social renting of 17% and social housing of 2%. Meanwhile, privately rented homes had remained unchanged at 11%.
The pie charts represent the
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changes
with the proportion of housing
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ownership
and
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renting
between 1991 and 2007.

Overall
, the total number of
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houses
available increased from 22 million
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houses
in 1991 to 27 million
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houses
in 2007. It is interesting to note that, the proportion of home
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ownership
increased
substantially
while
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social
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renting
and
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social
housing
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reduced
in its portion
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except for
private renting.

In 1991, home
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ownership
were the most popular type of housing, accounting for 60%, followed by
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social
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renting
which amounting of
nearly
23% of total
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houses
and the remaining portion
was directed
to private rent (about 11%) and
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social
housing (of about 6%).

In contrast
, by 2007, the proportion of home
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ownership
rose
substantially
to 70%, which represent 10% of growing rates.
However
, the rest of housing types decreased;
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social
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renting
of 17% and
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social
housing of 2%. Meanwhile,
privately
rented
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homes
had remained unchanged at 11%.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. v. 2

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