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he charts below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodations in England and wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

he charts below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodations in England and wales between 1918 and 2011.
The bar chart illustrates the number of families percentage-wise either living in owned homes or rented accommodations in England and Wales between the years 1918 and 2011. Overall, the first glance at the chart makes it quite evident that home ownership among households have steadily increased while the number of people renting a place has gone down at the end of the period. Although the trends seems pretty consistent, the last year shows an anomaly. It seems that owning a house has become more popular among families. There is an upwards trend that is gradual throughout 1918 to 1991. It was least famous to own homes in 1918 while most trendy in 2001, when about 68 percent owned private abodes. We observe a plateau during the decade before 2001, while a sudden drop follows it in 2011 when numbers drop to 64 percent. The percentage of renters show a downwards trend throughout the time period. It was about 78 percent, highest ever, in 1918 after which it came down to below 70 percent in 1939. Although it remained same for about 15 years or so, the decline continued again up until 2001. The lowest ever figure was recorded that year at only 30 percent. However, there is a slight rise visible in the next decade once again.
The bar chart illustrates the number of families percentage-wise either living in
owned
homes or rented accommodations in England and Wales between the years 1918 and 2011.

Overall
, the
first
glance at the chart
makes
it quite evident that home ownership among households have
steadily
increased while the number of
people
renting a place has gone down at the
end
of the period. Although the trends seems pretty consistent, the last
year
shows
an anomaly.

It seems that owning a
house
has become more popular among families.
There is an upwards
trend
that is
gradual throughout 1918 to 1991. It was least
famous
to
own
homes in 1918 while most trendy in 2001, when about 68
percent
owned
private abodes. We observe a plateau during the decade
before
2001, while a sudden drop follows it in 2011 when numbers drop to 64 percent.

The percentage of renters
show
a downwards trend throughout the time period. It was about 78
percent
,
highest
ever, in 1918 after which it came down to below 70
percent
in 1939. Although it remained same for about 15 years or
so
, the decline continued again up until 2001. The lowest ever figure
was recorded
that
year
at
only
30
percent
.
However
, there is a slight rise visible in the
next
decade once again.
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IELTS academic he charts below show the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodations in England and wales between 1918 and 2011.

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