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The pie charts below show responses by teachers of foreign languages in Britain to a survey concerning why their students are learning a foreign language. The first chart shows the main reason for learning a foreign language. The second chart shows how ma v.6

The pie charts below show responses by teachers of foreign languages in Britain to a survey concerning why their students are learning a foreign language. The first chart shows the main reason for learning a foreign language. The second chart shows how ma v. 6
The charts represent the proportion of reasons for learning a foreign language and the changes into these reasons. Overall, the main reasons for students to learn new language are majorly for travel, business and buying property/overseas. These reasons have changed significantly where recently the majority of students chose to study other languages for buying property/overseas and business. In terms of the original reason of learning a foreign language, a third of students chosen the travelling for the main reason of studying, 26% for business/work and buying property/overseas were represented of 19% of total reasons. The rest of reasons such as general interest, social contact, personal development and foreign partners were recorded of minimal proportion of reasons; 5%, 7%, 7% and 3% respectively. These reasons have changed drastically where the majority of students learnt a foreign language for buying property/oversea reasons of 34% and followed by business/work of 19% whereas travelling reason dropped to 3%. Meanwhile, other reasons have increased with its popularity. 15% of students chose to learn other languages for social contact reasons while no change had 15% of total reasons. The rest of reasons have remained the minimal proportions.
The charts represent the proportion of
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property/overseas
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of 34% and followed by business/work of 19% whereas travelling
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dropped to 3%. Meanwhile, other
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have increased with its popularity. 15% of
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for social contact
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had 15% of total
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remained the minimal proportions.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
38Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
The man who does not know other languages, unless he is a man of genius, necessarily has deficiencies in his ideas.
Victor Hugo

IELTS academic The pie charts below show responses by teachers of foreign languages in Britain to a survey concerning why their students are learning a foreign language. The first chart shows the main reason for learning a foreign language. The second chart shows how ma v. 6

Academic
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4 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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