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The pie charts below illustrate aspects of trade between Vietnam and the United States in 1994. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.1

The pie charts below illustrate aspects of trade between Vietnam and the United States in 1994.
The pie charts compare the amount of import and export between Vietnam and the united states in the year 1994. Overall, Vietnam was importing the maximum amount of products than its sales. The coffee was the major product imported by the US, Where garments generate the least revenue. The highest proportion of Aircraft parts were demanded in Vietnam but the cars were the least exported by the US. According to the first chart, in the trade between Vietnam and the US, Vietnam accounts for 23 million on coffee, which was maximum that year. The fruit and vegetable were following coffee, which sales were 16 million and were the second most exported product. Also, the seafood, rice, garment and other item incorporate a tiny proportion of money, which was under 5%, where the garment was least demanded product($2 million). From the second chart, the US had a dominant sales of aircraft parts, it generates 72 million dollars. Also, the machinery and other items generate more than 30 million funds from Vietnam. The fertilizer and cotton were demanded limitedly but the car was least attracted by the market. In total, the US made 172 million of gross revenue which was more than a triple then of Vietnam that year.
The pie charts compare the amount of import and export between Vietnam and the
united states
in the year 1994.

Overall
, Vietnam was importing the maximum amount of
products
than its sales. The coffee was the major
product
imported by the US, Where garments generate the least revenue. The highest proportion of Aircraft parts
were demanded
in Vietnam
but
the cars were the least exported by the US.

According to the
first
chart, in the trade between Vietnam and the US, Vietnam accounts for 23
million
on coffee, which was maximum that year. The fruit and vegetable were following coffee, which sales were 16
million
and were the second most exported
product
.
Also
, the seafood, rice, garment and other item incorporate a tiny proportion of money, which was under 5%, where the garment was least demanded
product($2
million).

From the second chart, the US had a dominant sales of aircraft parts, it generates 72
million
dollars.
Also
, the machinery and other items generate more than 30
million
funds from Vietnam. The fertilizer and cotton
were demanded
limitedly
but
the car was least attracted by the market. In total, the US made 172
million
of gross revenue which was more than a triple then of Vietnam that year.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic The pie charts below illustrate aspects of trade between Vietnam and the United States in 1994.

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4 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
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