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The pie charts below give information about the composition of household rubbish in the United Kingdom in two different years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The pie charts below give information about the composition of household rubbish in the United Kingdom in two different years
These two pie charts illustrate the data about the composition of household trash for the United Kingdom in 2 different years: 1985 and 2002. There are 8 categories, based on different types of rubbish. On the first pie chart, it shows that 36% of trash is paper in 1985. The second biggest segment is kitchen/organic waste at 28%. The rest parts are: both metals and wood at 8% and glass with plastic make up 14% in total. The smallest part is dust and cinders at 5%. In the second pie chart, dust and cinders are replaced with miscellaneous. There are about 16% of paper followed by 44% of kitchen/organic waste in 2002. 17% of chart belongs to miscellaneous, plastic and wood at 7 and 6% respectively. To give a glance at small parts, it can be seen, that both metals and glass make up 8% in sum. Textiles have the smallest proportion, at just 2%. As an overall trend, while the percentage for the majority types of rubbish falls, the kitchen/organic waste rises.
These two pie
charts
illustrate the data about the composition of household trash for the United Kingdom in 2
different
years: 1985 and 2002. There are 8 categories, based on
different
types of rubbish.

On the
first
pie
chart
, it
shows
that 36% of trash is paper in 1985. The second biggest segment is kitchen/organic waste at 28%. The rest parts are: both metals and wood at 8% and glass with plastic
make
up 14% in total.
The
smallest part is dust and cinders at 5%.

In the second pie
chart
, dust and cinders
are replaced
with miscellaneous. There are about 16% of paper followed by 44% of kitchen/organic waste in 2002. 17% of
chart
belongs to miscellaneous, plastic and wood at 7 and 6%
respectively
. To give a glance at
small
parts, it can be
seen
, that both metals and glass
make
up 8% in sum. Textiles have the smallest proportion, at
just
2%.

As an
overall
trend, while the percentage for the majority types of rubbish falls, the kitchen/organic waste rises.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS academic The pie charts below give information about the composition of household rubbish in the United Kingdom in two different years

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4 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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