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The charts below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main v.2

The charts below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015
The chart gives information about how much money earned from exporing in several items in a country in the two years (2015 and 2016) and units were measured in billon dollars. The table chart illustrates the percentage change in values of each product of exports in 2016, compared with 2015. Overall, almost the items in 2016 had the highest amount of money than that in 2015 except engineered products. Simultaneously, the categories related to textiles had the highest percentage of increase from 2015 to 2016. First of all, there was about 72 billion dollars which was gained from exporting petroleum products in 2016, this figure was higher than that in 2015 (around 61 billion dollars). Meanwhile, the amount of money earned in 2016 still was higher than that in 2015 in exporting engineered goods with around 61 billowing dollars and nearly 58 billon dollars respectively. In contrast, there was a distinctive difference from two previous items that the number of money earned in 2015 was higher than that in 2016 in exporting gems and jewellery with almost 42 billion dollars and nearly 41 dollars. In addition, the amount of money earned in both 2015 and 2016 year had about the same figure with around 31 billion dollars in agricultural products. Moreover, around 26 billion dollars and almost 31 billion dollars were the number of money earned in exporting textiles goods in 2015 and 2016 year respec. Secondly, the percentage change in almost categories tended to increase from 2015 to 2016 excluded gems and jewellery goods. Specially, textiles goods had the highest percentage change in 2016 compared to 2015 with 15. 24 percent, while there was inly 0. 81% increase belonged to agricultural products. The petroleum products and engineered goods had the increase percentage with 3% and 8. 5% respectively. Finally, the percentage of gems and jewellery items decreased 5. 18 percent in 2016 compared to 2015.
The chart gives information about how much
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money
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earned
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exporing
in several
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items
in a country in the two years (2015 and 2016) and units
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in
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billon
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dollars
. The table chart illustrates the
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percentage
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change
in values of each
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product
of exports in 2016, compared with 2015.

Overall
,
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almost
the
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items
in 2016 had the highest amount of
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money
than that in 2015 except engineered
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products
.
Simultaneously
, the categories related to textiles had the highest
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percentage
of
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increase
from 2015 to 2016.

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First of all
, there was about 72
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billion
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dollars
which
was gained
from
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exporting
petroleum
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products
in 2016, this figure was higher than that in 2015
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(around
61
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billion
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dollars)
. Meanwhile, the amount of
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money
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earned
in 2016
still
was higher than that in 2015 in
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exporting
engineered
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goods
with
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around
61 billowing
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dollars
and
nearly
58
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billon
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dollars
respectively
.
In contrast
, there was a distinctive difference from two previous
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items
that the number of
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money
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earned
in 2015 was higher than that in 2016 in
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exporting
gems and
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jewellery
with
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almost
42
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billion
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dollars
and
nearly
41
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dollars
.
In addition
, the amount of
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money
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earned
in both 2015 and 2016 year had about the same figure with
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around
31
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billion
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dollars
in agricultural
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products
.
Moreover
,
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around
26
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billion
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dollars
and
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almost
31
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billion
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dollars
were the number of
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money
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earned
in
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exporting
textiles
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goods
in 2015 and 2016 year
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respec
.

Secondly
, the
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percentage
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change
in
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almost
categories tended to
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increase
from 2015 to 2016 excluded gems and
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jewellery
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goods
.
Specially
, textiles
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goods
had the highest
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percentage
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change
in 2016 compared to 2015 with 15. 24 percent, while there was
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inly
0. 81%
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increase
belonged to agricultural
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products
. The petroleum
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products
and engineered
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goods
had the
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increase
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percentage
with 3% and 8. 5%
respectively
.
Finally
, the
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percentage
of gems and
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jewellery
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items
decreased 5. 18 percent in 2016 compared to 2015.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
64Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS academic The charts below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015

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