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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

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The two bar graphs represent what graduate and postgraduate students in the UK who did not secure full-time work did after graduating from their college in the year 2008. Overall, it is clear from the graphs that most of the UK graduates and postgraduates opted for further studies in the year 2008, while, a smaller number of these graduates were involved in voluntary work. Regarding the graduate students, more than 29. 5K students opted for further studies, and around 17. 5K were able to secure part-time work and about 16K of total graduates suffered from unemployment, while, exactly 3. 5K students went for voluntary work in the year 2008. On the other hand, there were around 2. 7K postgraduate students who went for further studies and part-timers around 2. 5K but almost 1. 6K students suffered from unemployment, while, voluntary workers on this stream are only 345.
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