The pictures illustrate the changes in Shipsmouth between 1995 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2
The pictures illustrate the changes in Shipsmouth between 1995 and 2010.
The two pictures highlight the main changes in Shipsmouth between the year 1995 and 2010.
Overall, It can be seen that in 1995, Shipsmouth was a green city with a lot of trees. But in 2010, it had become urbanised with so many new high-rise buildings, transport facilities, shopping centre, sport facilities.
The striking change is that the city was pedestrianised in 2010, which meant that there were some ways for only walking-people. A factory, which is a concern of pollution because of its smoke was converted and replaced by a modern shopping centre. Another interesting development is that there was many trees in 1995 in the western north and the eastern south of the city, which was cut down and by 2010, apartment blocks and an airport had been constructed in their places.
If we look at houses in 1995, they were redeveloped to become skyscrapers. Likewise, a church was knocked down to make way for a pub. And it is interesting to note that the construction of a new station and a football stadium in empty lands of the city.
The two pictures highlight the main
changes
in
Shipsmouth
between the year 1995 and 2010.
Overall
, It can be
seen
that in 1995,
Shipsmouth
was a green city with
a lot of
trees.
But
in 2010, it had become
urbanised
with
so
many
new high-rise buildings, transport facilities, shopping
centre
, sport facilities.
The striking
change
is that the city was
pedestrianised
in 2010, which meant that there were
some
ways for
only
walking-
people
. A factory, which is a concern of pollution
because
of its smoke
was converted
and replaced by a modern shopping
centre
. Another interesting development is that there was
many
trees in 1995 in the western north and the eastern south of the city, which was
cut
down and by 2010, apartment blocks and an airport had
been constructed
in their places.
If we look at
houses
in 1995, they
were redeveloped
to become skyscrapers.
Likewise
, a church
was knocked
down to
make
way for a pub. And it is interesting to note that the construction of a new station and a football stadium in empty lands of the city.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes