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The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years.
The pie-charts represent the main purpose of visiting Orange city by tourists in two different years. In addition, the total number of tourists in both years is also mentioned. Overall, the number of tourists visiting Orange city rose from 1 million to 1. 9 million. Although tourist' s interest in annual events got slightly reduced from 2006 to 2016, it remained as one of the major reason for tourists to visit the city. On the other hand, a dramatic increase has been observed in the visitors interested in the restaurants in 2016, whereas, the percentage of visitors attraction for Museums got reduced significantly. In 2006, 72% of the whole population were likely towards visiting events and museums as their primary interest, where the contribution was 45% and 27% respectively. while theatre visitors were 13% and the restaurant was the least interest as 10%. However, Visitors increase towards the restaurant skyrocketed to 41% in 2016, where events and restaurants together contribute 73% of the total interest. while interest in Museums and Theatre fell moderately, to 11% and 8% respectively.
The pie-charts represent the main purpose of visiting Orange city by
tourists
in two
different
years.
In addition
, the total number of
tourists
in both years is
also
mentioned.

Overall
, the number of
tourists
visiting Orange city rose from 1 million to 1. 9 million. Although
tourist&
#039; s
interest
in annual
events
got
slightly
reduced
from 2006 to 2016, it remained as one of the major reason for
tourists
to visit the city.
On the other hand
, a dramatic increase has
been observed
in the
visitors
interested in the
restaurants
in 2016, whereas, the percentage of
visitors
attraction for Museums
got
reduced
significantly
.

In 2006, 72% of the whole population were likely towards visiting
events
and museums as their primary
interest
, where the contribution was 45% and 27%
respectively
.
while
theatre
visitors
were 13% and the
restaurant
was the least
interest
as 10%.

However
,
Visitors
increase towards the
restaurant
skyrocketed to 41% in 2016, where
events
and
restaurants
together contribute 73% of the total
interest
.
while
interest
in Museums and
Theatre
fell
moderately
, to 11% and 8%
respectively
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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