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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.57

The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years.
The charts illustrate which activities became more popular between 2006-2016 in tourist who visited Orange City. Overall, the number of tourist increased from 1 million into 1. 9 million in a decade. The principal reason that tourists visited the city in 2006 was the annual events with 45% of preferences. By 2016, this type of activity decreased in 13% points but still continued as one of the favourites in second position. The second choice for tourism in 2006 was museums, which significant declined by 2016, they passed from 27% of choices to 11%, positioning in third place. However, the primary reason had changed over the years. For 2016, the restaurants were on the top of the chart, showing an abruptly jump up from 10% to 41%. Meanwhile, the other types of events presented a little variation of grow, passing to the final of the chart in 2006 to the fourth place in 2016. Finally, the theater never had been popular, also it went down 5 points of percentage by 2016.
The charts illustrate which activities became more popular between 2006-2016 in tourist who visited Orange City.

Overall
, the number of tourist increased from 1 million into 1. 9 million in a decade.

The principal reason that tourists visited the city in 2006 was the annual
events
with 45% of preferences. By 2016, this type of activity decreased in 13% points
but
still
continued as one of the
favourites
in second position. The second choice for tourism in 2006 was museums, which significant declined by 2016, they passed from 27% of choices to 11%, positioning in third place.

However
, the primary reason had
changed
over the years. For 2016, the restaurants were on the top of the chart, showing an
abruptly jump
up from 10% to 41%. Meanwhile, the other types of
events
presented a
little
variation of grow, passing to the final of the chart in 2006 to the fourth place in 2016.

Finally
, the theater never had been popular,
also
it went down 5 points of percentage by 2016.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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