There has been much debate about whether television is an operational instrument as an educational system or is overdone and inefficient tutor. This essay will discuss both instructive and unproductive aspects.
It seems to me that not only the TV can be useful as adequate teacher, but also it should be better educative programs is developed. Since television has direct connection with its audience, it would be effective. For instance, if candidates watch instructive English programs, it will be most productive and most competent. In this way, either documentary or scientific channel can be appeal more people.
On the other hand, as far as my view, neither television nor other media can not be in place of real teacher, Because, an instructor in school or college evaluate all students based on their aptitude. However, the TV which has public audiences is not able to classify them for example to specific or public spectators. So, it may be less effective as an cultural device.
In brief, I am convinced that television will be most useful if its programs is arranged regards to both common and special people.
There has been much debate about whether
television
is an operational instrument as an educational system or
is overdone
and inefficient tutor. This essay will discuss both instructive and unproductive aspects.
It seems to me that not
only
the TV can be useful as adequate teacher,
but
also
it should be better educative programs
is developed
. Since
television
has direct connection with its audience, it would be effective.
For instance
, if candidates
watch
instructive English programs, it will be most productive and most competent. In this way, either documentary or scientific channel can be appeal more
people
.
On the other hand
, as far as my view, neither
television
nor other media can not be in place of real teacher,
Because
, an instructor in school or college evaluate all students based on their aptitude.
However
, the TV which has public audiences is not able to classify them
for example
to specific or public spectators.
So
, it may be less effective as
an
cultural device.
In brief
, I
am convinced
that
television
will be
most
useful if its programs
is arranged
regards to both common and special
people
.
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