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The pie chart shows the origins of all students who came to England from abroad to study in 2001. The bar chart shows numbers of students coming to England from seven Far Eastern countries in the same year v.2

The pie chart shows the origins of all students who came to England from abroad to study in 2001. The bar chart shows numbers of students coming to England from seven Far Eastern countries in the same year v. 2
The pie chart provides information about the nations of students coming to England from abroad to study in 2001. Bar chart is the breakdown of Far Eastern region and gives detailed information about the number of students coming from Far Eastern countries, PRC, India, Japan, Korea, Malaysia and Singapore. Overall, European students more prefer studying in England than other countries whereas Middle East students represent the least percentage. In the second graph illustrate the breakdown of Far Eastern countries. PRC constituted substantial amount of Far Eastern regions opposed to Korea. In the first graph, E. U nearly accounted for two-fifths of all students, and then the percentage of Far East Countries, which is second country sending students to England, is slightly more than one third. Number of African students was nearly two times less than those of Far Eastern countries. Non-EC countries and Middle East regions don’t have the significant piece of pie chart 6 percent and 5 percent respectively. In second graph breakdown of Far East countries illustrated. PRC send 7000 students to England nearly three times more than Malaysia. Number of Singaporean and Indian students more than one thousand whereas in Japan and Korea studying in England didn’t popular than other countries.
The pie chart provides information about the nations of
students
coming to England from abroad to study in 2001. Bar chart is the breakdown of
Far
Eastern region and gives detailed information about the number of
students
coming from
Far
Eastern
countries
, PRC, India, Japan, Korea, Malaysia and Singapore.

Overall
, European
students
more prefer studying in England than other
countries
whereas Middle East
students
represent the least percentage. In the second graph illustrate the breakdown of
Far
Eastern
countries
. PRC constituted substantial amount of
Far
Eastern regions opposed to Korea.

In the
first
graph, E. U
nearly
accounted for two-fifths of all
students
, and then the percentage of
Far
East
Countries
, which is second
country
sending
students
to England, is
slightly
more than one third. Number of African
students
was
nearly
two times less than those of
Far
Eastern
countries
. Non-EC
countries
and Middle East regions don’t have the significant piece of pie chart 6 percent and 5 percent
respectively
.

In second graph breakdown of
Far
East
countries
illustrated. PRC
send
7000
students
to England
nearly
three times more than Malaysia. Number of Singaporean and Indian
students
more than one thousand whereas in Japan and Korea studying in England didn’t popular than other
countries
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS academic The pie chart shows the origins of all students who came to England from abroad to study in 2001. The bar chart shows numbers of students coming to England from seven Far Eastern countries in the same year v. 2

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