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The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.5

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.
This pie chart illustrates the expenses and different resources of income of a children' s charity in USA in one year of duration. In this duration of time the total amount of money received from 6 different sources is $53. 5 million and the amount of money spent in 3 different ways $53. 2 million. Among 6 different types of donation sources, donation of food by different people comprises about 86% of the total money as large number of people donate food for the children, whereas 10% of money is received from people of different communities. So these two sources has a great contribution in the income of children’s charity. The remaining few percentage of money is received from different program revenues, the income from their investments, Government Grants and other income resources. On the other hand, large amount of money were spent on various program services which is about 95. 8% of the total expenses, these include curricular and extra curricular activities. Various types of activities were carried out in different functions for fundraising which costs 2. 6% of the total expenses. Remaining 1. 6% were used in the management and other general activities of the charity.
This pie chart illustrates the expenses and
different
resources of
income
of a
children&
#039; s charity
in USA
in one year of duration. In this duration of time the
total
amount of
money
received from 6
different
sources is $53. 5 million and the amount of
money
spent in 3
different
ways $53. 2 million.

Among 6
different
types of donation sources, donation of food by
different
people
comprises
about 86% of the
total
money
as large number of
people
donate food for the children, whereas 10% of
money
is received
from
people
of
different
communities.
So
these two sources has a great contribution in the
income
of children’s charity. The remaining
few percentage
of
money
is received
from
different
program revenues, the
income
from their investments,
Government
Grants and other
income
resources.

On the other hand
, large amount of
money
were spent
on various program services which is about 95. 8% of the
total
expenses, these include curricular and
extra curricular
activities. Various types of activities
were carried
out in
different
functions for fundraising which costs 2. 6% of the
total
expenses. Remaining 1. 6% were
used
in the management and other general activities of the charity.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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