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Cambridge IELTS 1 Test 3You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer de v.1

Cambridge IELTS 1 Test 3 The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer de v. 1
These two charts show the expenditure on fast food by three income groups in Britain and the trends in consumption of fast food between 1970 and 1990. - Overall, high income and average income groups' expenditure on fast food which the biggest part was hamburgers. In contrast, low-income group most likely spend on fish and chips while fish and chips were the least significant part of high-income groups. The consumption of hamburgers and pizza have a rises of grams and the fish and chips have a fluctuation of grams. - Expenditure on hamburgers made up the biggest part by high income and average income group which accounted for about 45% and about 33% respectively. In contrast, expenditure on pizza made up the least part by average income and low-income groups which made up about 12% and 7% only. Fish and chips were the most significant part of expenditure by low-income group was 17%. - consumption of hamburgers was below 100 grams, being higher than pizza by approximately 40 grams. Then, it rose to almost 550 grams in 1900. There was a sharp growth of comsumption of hamburgers. Pizza was in the same way, at the beginning of the period consumption was only 60 grams and at the end of the period consumption was grow to almost 300 grams. In constrast, consumption of fish and chips were steadily falls, the figures from about 300 grams in 1970 fall to 240 grams in 1990.
These two charts
show
the
expenditure
on
fast
food by three
income
groups
in Britain and the trends in
consumption
of
fast
food between 1970 and 1990.

-


Overall
, high
income
and average
income
groups&
#039;
expenditure
on
fast
food which the biggest
part
was hamburgers.
In contrast
, low-income
group
most likely spend on fish and chips while fish and chips were the least significant
part
of high-income
groups
. The
consumption
of hamburgers and pizza have
a rises
of
grams
and the fish and chips have a fluctuation of grams.

-


Expenditure on hamburgers made up the biggest
part
by high
income
and average
income
group
which accounted for about 45% and about 33%
respectively
.
In contrast
,
expenditure
on pizza made up the least
part
by average
income
and low-income
groups
which made up about 12% and 7%
only
. Fish and chips were the most significant
part
of
expenditure
by low-income
group
was 17%.

-


consumption
of hamburgers was below 100
grams
, being higher than pizza by approximately 40
grams
. Then, it rose to almost 550
grams
in 1900. There was a sharp growth of
comsumption
of hamburgers. Pizza was
in the same way
, at the beginning of the period
consumption
was
only
60
grams
and at the
end
of the period
consumption
was
grow
to almost 300
grams
. In
constrast
,
consumption
of fish and chips were
steadily
falls, the figures from about 300
grams
in 1970 fall to 240
grams
in 1990.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS academic Cambridge IELTS 1 Test 3 The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer de v. 1

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  American English
7 paragraphs
242 words
5.5
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