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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. v.5

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. v. 5
The pie chart below is divided into four different sections, illustrates the main reasons why agricultural land degrades around the world, while the table compares the degradation by regions, including North America, Europe and the Oceania, during the 1990s. The predominant reason for land degradation would be over-grazing, taking up a percentage of 35 while deforestation fell into the second main reason with only five percent behind. Over-cultivation is the third major cause of the agricultural land to degrade. Each of the three reasons takes up roughly the similar equation while the other factors only cover 7 percent in the chart. In Europe, the degradation is the worst in comparison to the other two regions, having the majority of the land degraded from the result of deforestation. Oceania has the total degradation of 13 percent with two main reasons that are responsible for the less productive agricultural land, including over-grazing and deforestation. Over-cultivation, however, has none effect toward the land in Oceania according to the table. North America has the least degradation in the lands in the table below. It indicates that the land degraded in only five percent in the 1990s with the main cause of over-cultivation, taking up the percentage of 3. 3 of the total degradation of 5 percent.
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why agricultural
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land
degrades around the world, while the table compares the
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by regions, including North America, Europe and the Oceania, during the 1990s.

The predominant
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for
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land
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would be over-grazing, taking up a percentage of 35 while deforestation fell into the second
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behind. Over-cultivation is the third major cause of the agricultural
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to degrade. Each of the three
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takes up roughly the similar equation while the other factors
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cover 7
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In Europe, the
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degraded from the result of deforestation. Oceania has the total
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of 13
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that are responsible for the less productive agricultural
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, including over-grazing and deforestation. Over-cultivation,
however
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in Oceania according to the table.

North America has the least
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in the
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lands
in the table below. It indicates that the
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degraded in
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in the 1990s with the
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cause of over-cultivation, taking up the percentage of 3. 3 of the total
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IELTS academic The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. v. 5

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212 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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