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The map below shows the changes of a village in 1995 and now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The map below shows the changes of a village in 1995 and now.
The presented two maps indicate a series of modification in a village between 1995 and now. Generally, the village has changed radically over the period. Indeed, while land for planting and agricultural activities vanished, those of residential areas and sporting infrastructures were expanded substantially. Turning into detail, regarding to the northern part, there were a medium number of houses distributed on both side of main road, along with a building block near the heart of the village in 1995. From then on, more houses have been built now, with an easier accessibility made by a branch leading off the main road to the additional residential area. Meanwhile, farmland and forest park to the northeast of the village in 1995 were combined before having transformed into a golf court, integrating two tennis courts inside. Regarding to the southern region, in 1995, boats could approach the local thanks to a fishing port, which led to a fish market on sea shore. In addition, a chain of shops was located opposite to the fish market. However, at present, while the fishing port has been removed, the shops and the fish market have been substituted by a restaurant and apartments. By contrast, along with the café, the hotel remained unchanged despite the construction of an adjacent car park.
The presented two maps indicate a series of modification in a
village
between 1995 and
now
.

Generally
, the
village
has
changed
radically
over the period.
Indeed
, while land for planting and agricultural activities vanished, those of residential areas and sporting infrastructures
were expanded
substantially
.

Turning into detail,
regarding to
the northern part, there were a medium number of
houses
distributed on both side of main road, along with a building block near the heart of the
village
in 1995. From then on, more
houses
have
been built
now
, with an easier accessibility made by a branch leading off the main road to the additional residential area. Meanwhile, farmland and forest park to the northeast of the
village
in 1995
were combined
before
having transformed into a golf court, integrating two tennis courts inside.

Regarding to
the southern region, in 1995, boats could approach the local thanks to a fishing port, which led to a fish market on sea shore.
In addition
, a chain of shops
was located
opposite to the fish market.
However
, at present, while the fishing port has
been removed
, the shops and the fish market have
been substituted
by a restaurant and apartments. By contrast, along with the café, the hotel remained unchanged despite the construction of an adjacent car park.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS academic The map below shows the changes of a village in 1995 and now.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
214 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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