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The diagram below shows the process of generating electricity from coal. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. v.2

The diagram below shows the process of generating electricity from coal.
The process demonstrates the way in which thermoelectricity is produced. Overall, there are four main stages of the production, beginning with coal and culminating with electricity transmitting in the electric wire. The first stage of the electricity generating is coal heating. The stage begins with the coal supply system where coal is loaded on the conveyor belts to continuously move to the pulverizer. Following this, the mineral substance is compressed into coal powder. Having been crushed, the coal powder is carried to the boiler to be burned. As soon as the burning step produces heat, the heatwaves instantly follows the tube to the turbine for the second stage which is generating electricity. Besides, the dust exacted from the burning process is undergone an auxiliary stage. After the dust collection system accumulates all the muck, all the muck is released by a stack. Additionally, the ash is also handled by the ash solving system to disposal outside the manufacturing process. Back to the heat perspective, the heatwaves moves the turbine leading to the movement of the generator. Subsequently, the generator produces electricity which is stored in the substation or a transformer. These mentioned power stations are going to transmit electricity to the electric wire. While most of the heat wave’s purpose is turning the turbine, a minor amount of heat goes into the condenser. Then the heatwaves is cooled down by the cooling system which produces cold gas returning to reduce the temperature of the boiler.
The process demonstrates the way in which
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thermoelectricity
is produced
.
Overall
, there are four main
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stages
of the production, beginning with coal and culminating with
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electricity
transmitting in the electric wire.

The
first
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stage
of the
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electricity
generating is coal heating. The
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stage
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begins
with the coal supply
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system
where coal
is loaded
on the conveyor belts to
continuously
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move
to the pulverizer. Following this, the mineral substance
is compressed
into coal powder. Having
been crushed
, the coal powder
is carried
to the boiler to
be burned
. As
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soon
as the burning step produces
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heat
, the heatwaves
instantly
follows the tube to the turbine for the second
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stage
which is generating
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electricity
.
Besides
, the dust exacted from the burning process is undergone an auxiliary
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stage
. After the dust collection
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system
accumulates all the muck, all the muck
is released
by a stack.
Additionally
, the ash is
also
handled by the ash solving
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system
to disposal outside the manufacturing process. Back to the
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heat
perspective, the heatwaves
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moves
the turbine leading to the movement of the generator.
Subsequently
, the generator produces
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electricity
which
is stored
in the substation or a transformer. These mentioned power stations are going to transmit
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electricity
to the electric wire. While most of the
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heat
wave’s purpose is turning the turbine, a minor amount of
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heat
goes into the condenser. Then the heatwaves
is cooled
down by the cooling
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system
which produces
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cold
gas returning to
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reduce
the temperature of the boiler.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the process of generating electricity from coal.

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
245 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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