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t can be seen that, OECD and Developing countries accounts for the major rate of gas emissons while transition economies v.2

t can be seen that, OECD and Developing countries accounts for the major rate of gas emissons while transition economies v. 2
The pie chart combined with the bar graph illustrates the proportion of greenhouse gas emissions worldwide in 3 different fields namely OECD, transition economies and developing countries and the worldwide carbon dioxide emissions by many sectors in 2002 and forecast for 2030. It can be seen that OECD and Developing countries account for the major rate of gas emissions while transition economies are responsible for the minority of gas emissions. Industry becomes the major cause of carbon dioxide, simultaneously, waste contributions, transportation and consumer is predicted to experience an upward trend in the future. The 2 given pie charts show that there will be a slight increase in the percentage of emissions in the developing countries from 38% in 2002 to 48% in 2020. Whereas, in OECD, the rate of gas emission is expected to decrease to 43%, is 9% less than in 2002. countries with transition economies is estimated to remain at 9% in 2020, is 1% less than in 2002. The bar chart reveals that industry is the main factor which contributes to carbon dioxide emissions, the figure is expected to rise to nearly 11 billion tons in 2020. next comes the consumer sector, which is projected to produce more than 8 billion tons in 2020, is twice as much as the figure in 2002. the third largest producer will be transportations with the amount is expected up to over 5 millions ton in 2020, triple than the quantitive in 20002
The pie chart combined with the bar graph illustrates the proportion of greenhouse
gas
emissions
worldwide in 3
different
fields
namely
OECD, transition economies and developing
countries
and the worldwide carbon dioxide
emissions
by
many
sectors in 2002 and forecast for 2030.

It can be
seen
that OECD and Developing
countries
account for the major rate of
gas
emissions
while transition economies are responsible for the minority of
gas
emissions
. Industry becomes the major cause of carbon dioxide,
simultaneously
, waste contributions, transportation and consumer
is predicted
to experience an upward trend in the future.

The 2
given
pie charts
show
that there will be a slight increase in the percentage of
emissions
in the developing
countries
from 38% in 2002 to 48% in 2020. Whereas, in OECD, the rate of
gas
emission
is
expected
to decrease to 43%, is 9% less than in 2002.
countries
with transition economies
is estimated
to remain at 9% in 2020, is 1% less than in 2002.

The bar chart reveals that industry is the main factor which contributes to carbon dioxide
emissions
, the figure is
expected
to rise to
nearly
11 billion tons in 2020.
next
comes
the consumer sector, which
is projected
to produce more than 8 billion tons in 2020, is twice as much as the figure in 2002.
the
third largest producer will be transportations with the amount is
expected
up to over 5 millions ton in 2020,
triple
than the
quantitive
in 20002
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS academic t can be seen that, OECD and Developing countries accounts for the major rate of gas emissons while transition economies v. 2

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