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The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment. v.1

The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment. v. 1
The provided flowchart illustrates the process of consumer goods production in an orderly manner and includes various stages of production and sales together with the feedback supplied towards the earlier stages which allows improvements and modifications throughout the process. The product manufacturing process is initiated with the purchase of raw materials and manufactured components which are kept in storage until the production process is planned. Production planning stage involves product research and design. The process is carried through the stages of assembly, inspection, testing and packaging of the final product sequentially which is then dispatched for sales to the consumers. Production planning provides feedback for storage. Likewise, sales provide feedback for both production planning and market research, which in turn provides feedback for advertising and packaging. Similarly, both market research and testing provide feedback for design. In summary, this flowchart illustrates the production process and the feedback provided at various stages of goods manufacturing.
The provided flowchart illustrates the
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of consumer
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goods
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production
Consider replacing "in an orderly manner" with the adverb for "orderly"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in an orderly manner
and includes various
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stages
of
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production
and sales together with the
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feedback
supplied towards the earlier
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stages
which
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allows
improvements and modifications throughout the process.

The product manufacturing
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process
is initiated
with the
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purchase
of raw materials and manufactured components which are
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kept
in storage until the
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production
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process
is planned
.
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Production
planning
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stage
involves product research and design. The
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process
is carried
through the
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stages
of assembly, inspection, testing and packaging of the final product
sequentially
which is then dispatched for sales to the consumers.

Production planning
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provides
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feedback
for storage.
Likewise
, sales
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provide
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feedback
for both
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production
planning and market research, which in turn
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provides
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feedback
for advertising and packaging.
Similarly
, both market research and testing
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provide
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feedback
for design.

In summary, this flowchart illustrates the
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production
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process
and the
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feedback
provided at various
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stages
of
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goods
manufacturing.
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26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment. v. 1

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4 paragraphs
154 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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