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The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.5

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
The table illustrates the percentage of wide variety of poor people, classified by family type, in Australia in 1999. Overall, the last variable has a percentage of 11% that means 1. 8 million Australian inhabitants lived in poverty in that period. Most of them were sole parents or single without children cumulating together 40% of individuals. In terms of poor households, 12 out of 100 couples with children were poorest having a number of 933 thousands of people which represents almost one-half of all households. Just a small part of aged couples (4%) contributed at the entire proportion of poor people. Not far were the single aged person, 5% of these were destitute with only 54 thousand of individuals. In spite of a lower percentage of disadvantaged couples without children of 7%, they have recorded in a large number individuals, 211 thousand. In opposite case, are obviously sole parents with the highest proportion of people (21%), but with only 232 thousands of citizens.
The table illustrates the percentage of wide variety of poor
people
, classified by family type, in Australia in 1999.

Overall
, the last variable has a percentage of 11% that means 1. 8 million Australian inhabitants
lived
in poverty in that period. Most of them were sole parents or single without children cumulating together 40% of individuals.

In terms of poor households, 12 out of 100 couples with children were
poorest
having a number of
933 thousands of
people
which represents almost one-half of all households.
Just
a
small
part of aged couples (4%) contributed at the entire proportion of poor
people
. Not far were the
single aged
person, 5% of these were destitute with
only
54 thousand of individuals.

In spite of
a lower percentage of disadvantaged couples without children of 7%, they have recorded in a large number individuals, 211 thousand. In opposite case, are
obviously
sole parents with the highest proportion of
people
(21%),
but
with
only
232 thousands of
citizens.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

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