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The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now ans plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.2

The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now ans plans for its development.
One of the two presented blueprints is the outlay of Islip town at present and the other one depicts the possible improvement that could be done at the town centre. A quick glance at these maps show the major plan. Fortunately, many plans were at work to develop the centre. One of which is expanding the shops and replaced with bus halt, shopping mall and car park along with new housing lanes on either side i. e. , north and south side of the main road which would be changed later to a walkers road. The distinguishing part was the two lane road all around the centre with Y junctions on eastern and western side connecting the school, housing, park and other important places. For this purpose the partial area of park and major area of farm area was cut off. However, school, housing, and shops to the south side of pedestrian road remain unchanged.
One of the two presented blueprints is the outlay of
Islip
town at present and the other one depicts the possible improvement that could
be done
at the town
centre
. A quick glance at these maps
show
the major plan.

Fortunately
,
many
plans were at work to develop the
centre
. One of which is expanding the shops and replaced with bus halt, shopping mall and car park along with new housing lanes on either side
i. e.
,
north and south side of the main road which would be
changed
later to a walkers road.

The distinguishing part was the two lane road all around the
centre
with Y junctions on eastern and western side connecting the school, housing, park and other
important
places. For this purpose the partial area of park and major area of farm area was
cut
off.

However
, school, housing, and shops to the south side of pedestrian road remain unchanged.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS academic The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now ans plans for its development.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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