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The map and charts below indicate land use for different purposes in four different U S regions Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the charts below You should write at least 150 works v.2

The map and charts below indicate land use for different purposes in four different U S regions Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the charts below You should write at least 150 works v. 2
The map and the associated four pie charts illustrate the utility of land in four different area in America. It is obvious from the demonstration that the four regions Central, East, South and South west vary from each other in terms of the purposes of land using. According to the pie charts, crops represent a significant percentage of land using in the Central, South as well as South West. This is true especially in the South where approximately 75% of the land is used for growing crops. Farming, on the other hand, comes to the second place contributing to 25% in the Central, 25% om the South and 20% in the South West respectively. The East region is different from the other three areas by devoting a majority of land to farming (75%) and only 20% of land to crops. Both of these four regions have a small proportion of land for other purpose covering only 18% in the East, 5% in the South, 19% in the South West and 19% in the Central area respectively.
The map and the associated four pie charts illustrate the utility of
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in four
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area in America. It is obvious from the demonstration that the four regions
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Central
, East, South and South west vary from each
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other
in terms of the purposes of
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land
using.

According to the pie charts, crops represent a significant percentage of
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land
using in the
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Central
, South
as well
as South West. This is true
especially
in the South where approximately 75% of the
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land
is
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used
for growing crops. Farming, on the
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other
hand,
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comes
to the second place contributing to 25% in the
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Central
, 25%
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the South and 20% in the South West
respectively
. The East region is
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different
from the
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other
three areas by devoting a majority of
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land
to farming (75%) and
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only
20% of
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land
to crops. Both of these four regions have a
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small
proportion of
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land
for
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other
purpose covering
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only
18% in the East, 5% in the South, 19% in the South West and 19% in the
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Central
area
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The map and charts below indicate land use for different purposes in four different U S regions Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the charts below You should write at least 150 works v. 2

Academic
  American English
2 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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