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The Line Graph Gives Information About Land Used For Organic Crops In Two Countries From 1985 To 2010. v.2

The Line Graph Gives Information About Land Used For Organic Crops In Two Countries From 1985 To 2010. v. 2
The land used for organic crops in two nations has been depicted by given line graph from 1985 to 2010. One glance at the graph is enough to make it clear that maximum land for organic food had been used by Country A in middle years rather than Country B. It is clear that in 1985, approximately 25 hectare land was used by both nations. Whereas from 1985 to 1990, there was an increase in the usage of land, which was 60 hectare by Country A and 30 hectare by Country B and in 1995, the land used for organic food was witnessed at approximately 160 hectare by Countrie B and below 150 hectare by Country B. Moving further, in 2000, the land used by Country A had peak value at 280 hectare but after that the usage of land started declining and from 2005 to 2010 there was a rapid decline and reached at 150 hectare. In Country B, land usage was going down after 2000 year and in 2010 it was witnessed at 150 hectare, which was similar to country A.
The
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for organic crops in two nations has
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line graph from 1985 to 2010.

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that maximum
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for organic food had been
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A in middle years
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B.

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that in 1985, approximately 25 hectare
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land
was
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used
by both nations. Whereas from 1985 to 1990, there was an increase in the usage of
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land
, which was 60
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hectare
by
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A and 30
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by
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B and in 1995, the
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land
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used
for organic food
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B and below 150
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by
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B.

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further
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land
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A had peak value at 280
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hectare
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after that the usage of
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land
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started
declining and from 2005 to 2010 there was a rapid decline and reached at 150
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hectare
. In
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B,
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land
usage was going down after 2000 year and in 2010 it
was witnessed
at 150
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hectare
, which was similar to
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A.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS academic The Line Graph Gives Information About Land Used For Organic Crops In Two Countries From 1985 To 2010. v. 2

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4 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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