The line graph below shows the proportion of population aged 65 and over in USA, Sweden and Japan from 1940 to 2040. v.2
The line graph below shows the proportion of population aged 65 and over in USA, Sweden and Japan from 1940 to 2040. v. 2
The figure elucidates the percentage of mature people’s population in three different nations. At first glance, it is evident that Japan has a different pattern in comparison with the other two states.
To begin with, the number of older individuals in Japan experienced a significant drop between 1940, which made up at 5%, and 1980, which constituted at just below a twentieth. Afterwards, it, erratically, uplifted tremendously over the following 60 years, soaring to just across a fourth by the end of the period shown.
In contrast, 1940 to 1980 witnessed a dramatic growth for the population of aged 65 and over in Sweden and USA where it, initially, stood at well under a tenth for Sweden and at well beyond 5% for USA, and achieved to just below 15% and three-twentieths respectively. Unexpectedly, both of these countries palpitated considerably in the next 60 years where it terminated to 25% for Sweden and well over a fifth for USA in 2040.
The figure elucidates the percentage of mature
people
’s population in three
different
nations. At
first
glance, it is evident that Japan has a
different
pattern
in comparison
with the other two states.
To
begin
with, the number of older individuals in Japan experienced a significant drop between 1940, which made up at 5%, and 1980, which constituted at
just
below a twentieth. Afterwards, it,
erratically
, uplifted
tremendously
over the following 60 years, soaring to
just
across a fourth by the
end
of the period shown.
In contrast
, 1940 to 1980 witnessed a dramatic growth for the population of aged 65 and over in Sweden and USA where it,
initially
, stood at well under a tenth for Sweden and at well beyond 5%
for USA
, and achieved to
just
below 15% and three-twentieths
respectively
.
Unexpectedly
, both of these countries palpitated
considerably
in the
next
60
years where
it terminated to 25% for Sweden and well over a fifth
for USA
in 2040.
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