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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. v.12

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of citizens with an age about 65 years old and over. The figures cover a period of 100 years starting from 1940 in three nations. Overall, is obviously the trends for all three countries start with a lower proportion and in the end, all percentages soared. Also, the growth rate, between 1940 and 2040, was erratic for Sweden and USA, but the ratio Japanese inhabitants aged 65 and over rocketed after 2025. Particularly, the evolution of trends in Sweden and USA was parallel during of 40 years, but the percentage at the beginning was smaller for Swedish (7. 5%) than Americans (9%). After 1980, in USA the proportion of population aged 65 and over decreased steadily until 2020 and then will rise gradually having a ratio of 23%, in 2040. In the case of Sweden the percentage fluctuated all the period reaching in 2040 at 25% of individuals with age about 65 years old and over.
The line graph illustrates the
percentage
of citizens with an age about 65 years
old
and
over
. The figures cover a period of 100 years starting from 1940 in three nations.

Overall
, is
obviously
the trends for all three countries
start
with a lower proportion and in the
end
, all
percentages
soared.
Also
, the growth rate, between 1940 and 2040, was erratic for Sweden and USA,
but
the ratio Japanese inhabitants aged 65 and
over
rocketed after 2025.

Particularly
, the evolution of trends in Sweden and USA was parallel during of 40 years,
but
the
percentage
at the beginning was smaller for Swedish (7. 5%) than Americans (9%). After 1980,
in USA
the proportion of population aged 65 and
over
decreased
steadily
until 2020 and then will rise
gradually
having a ratio of 23%, in 2040. In the case of Sweden the
percentage
fluctuated all the period reaching in 2040 at 25% of individuals with age about 65 years
old
and
over
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Academic
3 paragraphs
162 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resources: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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