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The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar. v.1

The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar. v. 1
The line graph shows changes in GDP in four countries and compares the GDP of those countries between 2010 and 2015. As can be seen, Malaysia had a better GDP than other countries listed in the diagram and GDP is Nepal remained constant throughout the time. As is outlined in the graph, GDP in Malaysia was approximately 270 billion US dollar in 2010 which was the highest among the given countries. Pakistan’s GDP at that moment was roughly 180 billion which was around 70 billion higher than that of Bangladesh. Nepal with its meagre 10 billion Gross Domestic Product stood at the bottom of the list. Looking further, Malaysian GDP gradually increased till 2014 and then witnessed a decline. GDP in this country was 300 billion dollar in 2015, which was the highest. GDP in Pakistan progressed moderately and this progress accelerated between 2014 and 2015 at which point it nearly touched Malaysian’s GDP.   Bangladesh’s GDP gradually improved and almost doubled in 5 years. Interestingly, Nepal is the only country whose GDP remained static at only 10 billion dollars.
The line graph
shows
changes
in GDP in four
countries
and compares the GDP of those
countries
between 2010 and 2015. As can be
seen
, Malaysia had a better GDP than other
countries
listed in the diagram and GDP is Nepal remained constant throughout the time.

As
is outlined
in the graph, GDP in Malaysia was approximately 270
billion
US dollar in 2010 which was the highest among the
given
countries
. Pakistan’s GDP at that moment was roughly 180
billion
which was around 70
billion
higher than that of Bangladesh. Nepal with its
meagre
10
billion
Gross Domestic Product stood at the bottom of the list.

Looking
further
, Malaysian GDP
gradually
increased till 2014 and then witnessed a decline. GDP in this
country
was 300
billion
dollar
in 2015, which was the highest. GDP in Pakistan progressed
moderately
and this progress accelerated between 2014 and 2015 at which point it
nearly
touched Malaysian’s GDP.
 
Bangladesh’s GDP
gradually
improved
and almost doubled in 5 years.
Interestingly
, Nepal is the
only
country
whose GDP remained static at
only
10
billion
dollars.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS academic The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar. v. 1

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180 words
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