The line graph compares the percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009 v.2
The line graph compares the percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009 v. 2
The provided line graph illustrates the detailed information about the percentage of people using the internet in three different countries, namely america, Canada and mexico along one decade.
At first glance, the internet seemed to become increasingly popular throughout this period in each countries. In comparison with mexicans, the rate of the internet users who came from america and Canada were higher by large margins of data in this time period.
On average, in 1999, the rate of american using the internet ranked first, at roughly 20%. By contrast, mexican people contributed the least figure, just nearly 5%, to the rate of people who are the internet users in 1999.
Looking at the line graph in more detail, we can see that the rate of internet users in Canada went up to 10 times higher at about 100% in 2009. Also, after the incrementally rise to around four-fifths, the figure of american who used the internet stood second among the three countries. The figure for people using the internet in mexico grew steadily by nearly 30%; however, it was still the lowest.
The provided line graph illustrates the detailed information about the percentage of
people
using the internet in three
different
countries,
namely
america
, Canada and
mexico
along one decade.
At
first
glance, the internet seemed to become
increasingly
popular throughout this period in each
countries
.
In comparison
with
mexicans
, the
rate
of the internet users who came from
america
and Canada were higher by large margins of data in this time period.
On average, in 1999, the
rate
of
american
using the internet ranked
first
, at roughly 20%. By contrast,
mexican
people
contributed the least figure,
just
nearly
5%, to the
rate
of
people
who are the internet users in 1999.
Looking at the line graph in more detail, we can
see
that the
rate
of internet users in Canada went up to 10 times higher at about 100% in 2009.
Also
, after the
incrementally
rise to around four-fifths, the figure of
american
who
used
the internet stood second among the three countries. The figure for
people
using the internet in
mexico
grew
steadily
by
nearly
30%;
however
, it was
still
the lowest.
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