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The line chart below show The percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010 v.2

The line chart below show The percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010 v. 2
The line graphs below illustrate comparisons the percentage of man and women teacher in six different variety of educational setting of the UK in 2010. Overall, it can be seen that the most obvious pieces of information where that girls absolutely select nursery or pre school which the male prefer to university. Regarding to the data the most popular demand component by girls was the nursery or pre-school which were stood at 100%, it was followed by primary school marked at almost 90%. Unfortunatelly, at university it became the most decreased class over the period. Only went down about 75%. While on other category also falling significantly to approximately between 60% and 40%. Unlike with the case above, the boys happened to be the most sharply increased which started from nursery get 0, 1% then it reached a peak in university dramatically. Then, the second largest percentage obviously at private training institute which counted at 45%.
The line graphs below illustrate comparisons the percentage of
man
and women teacher in six
different
variety of educational setting of the UK in 2010.

Overall
, it can be
seen
that the most obvious pieces of information where that girls
absolutely
select nursery or
pre
school which the male prefer to university.

Regarding to
the data the most popular demand component by girls was the nursery or
pre-school
which
were stood
at 100%, it
was followed
by primary school marked at almost 90%.
Unfortunatelly
, at university it became the most decreased
class
over the period.
Only
went down about 75%. While on other category
also
falling
significantly
to approximately between 60% and 40%.

Unlike with the case above, the boys happened to be the most
sharply
increased which
started
from nursery
get
0, 1% then it reached a peak in university
dramatically
. Then, the second largest percentage
obviously
at private training institute which counted at 45%.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS academic The line chart below show The percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010 v. 2

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