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The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in UK in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.7

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in UK in 2010
the chart gives information the percentage of two genders teachers in six diverse kinds of educational condition in UK in 2010. The data is measured by percentage. Overall, it is clear that the most significant increase was nursey/pre-school and the greatest faction was university. Accordibg to six educational types of educational setting of female. The first greatesr type was nursery/pre-school which had nearly a hundred. Followed by primary school as the second highest crowd which was above ninety. different from secondary scho, college and private training institute which had similar percentage that you was nearly three-fifths. Meanwhile, university was the lowest which had untder two-fifths. On the other hand, from educational exampler of male. it began from university which had the biggest percentage that almost four-fifths. Then, private training institute, college and private teaining institute which had identical percentage that had under three-fifths. Therefore, primary school and nurcery/pre-school as the lowest percentage from all of crowds which was above one in ten.
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of two genders teachers in six diverse kinds of
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condition in UK in 2010. The data
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.
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, it is
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that the most significant increase was
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pre-school
and the greatest faction was university.

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types of
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setting of female. The
first
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greatesr
type was nursery/
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pre-school
which had
nearly
a hundred. Followed by primary school as the second highest crowd which was above ninety.
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different
from secondary
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scho
, college and private training institute which had similar
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that you was
nearly
three-fifths. Meanwhile, university was the lowest which had
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untder
two-fifths.

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, from
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of male.
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it
began from university which had the biggest
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that almost four-fifths. Then, private training institute, college and private
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teaining
institute which had identical
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percentage
that had under three-fifths.
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, primary school and
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/
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pre-school
as the lowest
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from
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in UK in 2010

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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