The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.1
The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. 
The diagram demonstrates the process of making chocolate. The process has ten parts which is begun from the growing of the cocoa and culminated in the production of chocolate.
First and foremost, Cocoa beans in three countries South America, Africa, Indonesia are planted until their pods become ripe and red, then they harvest and separate pods and white cocoa beans. Afterward, The beans are placed in a large tray to ferment, after the fermentation the cocoa beans will be spread under the sun so they will be dried. Next, they put these beans in a large sacks and transported them to factory by train or lorry. Later, the beans will be roasted at 350C by grain machine, after which the beans move to another machine and that machine will crush the beans to remove the outer shell. In the final stage, the inner part will be pressed to produce liquid chocolat
The diagram demonstrates the process of making chocolate. The process has ten parts which  
is begun
 from the growing of the cocoa and culminated in the production of chocolate. 
First
 and foremost, Cocoa  
beans
 in three countries South America, Africa, Indonesia  
are planted
 until their pods become ripe and red, then they harvest and separate pods and white cocoa  
beans
. Afterward, The  
beans
  are placed
 in a large tray to ferment, after the fermentation the cocoa  
beans
 will  
be spread
 under the sun  
so
 they will  
be dried
.  
Next
, they put these  
beans
 in a large sacks and transported them to factory by train or lorry. Later, the  
beans
 will  
be roasted
 at 350C by grain machine, after which the  
beans
  move
 to another machine and that machine will crush the  
beans
 to remove the outer shell. In the final stage, the inner part will  
be pressed
 to produce liquid  
chocolat
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes