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The diagram below shows the percentage of share of total world production of wheat by Asia Europe and other part of the world from the years 1840 to 2000
The bar diagram illustrates the proportion of total world' s wheat production by Asia, Europe and the rest of the world, from 1840 to 2000. Overall, it is apparent that at the beginning of the given period, while Asia and Europe produced a significant amount of wheat than the other part of the world, at the end of the period both country' s wheat production was declined. In 1840, Asia and Europe in total produced 90% of wheat, whereas the rest of the world produced only 10%. In Asia, the production of wheat reduced to 30% in 1880 and 40 years later it again decreased to 20%. On the other hand, in Europe, wheat production increased gradually, which was 45% in 1880, and again increased by 5% in 1920. A similar trend also observed by the rest of the world. In 1960, while Europe with the rest of the world captured a total of 75% of the world' s wheat production, Asia comprised only 25%. Finally, in 2000, Asia again gained the highest position by capturing 40% of the world' s wheat production. On the contrary, Europe' s wheat production declined to about 28%.
The bar diagram illustrates the proportion of total
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declined to about 28%.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the percentage of share of total world production of wheat by Asia Europe and other part of the world from the years 1840 to 2000

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